i was bored and inspired tew right by one of ma mates called luce.
It had been raining all day and britney had been busy talkin to toby by msn all day
because she couldent go outside cause of the rain was really bad.Although she really
liked the rain she couldnt be botherd to get wet.Toby was britney's best mate,they had
been friends for a good few years.But only a few weeks ago she had found out that she liked
him a bit more than she thought she did.
However Toby did actually knew she liked him like that he didn't really
believe it so he hadn't acted on it, plus he didn't really like her back that way.
Back to the point, Britney had been talkin to him all day about music and what it would
be like if they were together and what not...they always joked about things like that.
"you know i have a girlfriend,im sorry it just wouldnt be possible."
"yer i know but still,we would be great together and you know it!" she said
Toby had a girlfriend called zara,,,ooo how britney envied her!
but she knew toby really liked this girl so she didnt wanna get involved.
Every night she would worry about what will happen the next day,'will he end it?
will he see the light and choose me insted?'but naaahh
every night turned tew a sleepless one,"whats the use" she always said
she couldnt eat,she couldnt sleep she had got soo depressed and just laid in bed
day after day after day, crying to her hearts content. one week she had been over her mates
house non-stop to get her mind of it,she was a good friend of the family and went round
every week to see her best mate tasha didnt mind and her mum jane had been really cool
bout the hole thing and we had been watchin all the saw 1-4 movies with her,tasha and her
other best mate kailey. Brit loved that name sooo unique bit like kaileys personality.
Britny felt that jane was her mate cause she was soo cool she was like another mother to
her.She acted like she was 20 when she was older. Anyway that week Britney asked everyone
kailey,tasha and cheryl to sleep round her house so they could go hyper.
As she knocked on Tasha's door she saw jane come from the back.
"hey Brit, love im going for a walk. You just go in find tasha, she's been waitin for ya."
she said with a cheary smile.
"Alright,tah.Have a nice walk!"
she walked away "thanks love." Brit walked in the house into the kitchen.
"wait a sec brit just getting ma hair straightned!" came a little shout from upstairs
'god this might take a while' she thought
"lol,kk don't be toooo long we gotta go kaileys to see if she's still coming to the sleep-
over!"
Brit sat on the sofa and played around with all of the cat's.
"let's go then, did you see my mum on the way out?" she asked. "she's in a weird mood this
mornin"
"ummm thats weird,she seemed fine to me, ye she said she wasgoin for a walk."
They started to walk to kaileys, she was already waiting at the door waiting for us.
"what took you so long???! we need to pick up cheryl yet, her house is ages away and we
only have 10 minutes!" she shouted
"UUURRRRGGHH it's just tasha she was taking ages to get ready!"
"fine whatever lets go."
They picked up cheryl and then went to britneys house, to get thier party on.
they started off by cookin some cakes, mr men cakes to be exact lol
it was about 8 oclock when they got a really shocking call from her tasha's dad, that
WILL GARENTY TO CHANGE THEIR LIVES!
to be continued!....
Good start, but not quite as gripping for me, I already know whats going to happen!